Monday, 27 February 2017

However Yellow Gingerly Discovered Remarkable, by Jessica

Jumping up and down is absolutely remarkable; however you can’t jump up and down for long. I discovered that last week on my 9th birthday. I was up at bang on 4:31. My parents were asleep snoring so loud you could hear them from outside the house. I jumped up and down hoping that they would wake up after hearing the intense noise. I jumped and jumped thinking I could go on and on forever. I soon was down on the yellow carpet panting. My brother sat down on the ancient armchair gingerly. He probably thought I was absolutely crazy.


  1. You have some good vocabulary in this text.

  2. I like the ending Jessica